Journal….

Need help with my English question – I’m studying for my class.

Instructions:

To begin this assignment, compose your Journal 14 answering the following prompt:

  1. Choose one of your Responses from this class; it is not important which one. Once you have chosen it, you are going to do a little surgery on a few of the sentences by employing the “Paramedic Method”; you are going to save the life of some of those sentences. You are a hero!
  2. Choose three sentences from your response and paste them into this Journal entry.
  3. Rewrite them after following the “Paramedic Method” steps below:
  • Circle the prepositions. Eliminate any unnecessary prepositions.
  • Identify any references to the researchers (the doer).
  • Replace references to the researchers with a passive construction that emphasizes the experiment (what was done).
  • Eliminate any unnecessary slow wind-ups.
  • Eliminate any redundancies.

Write your original and revised sentences (150-250 words).