I need to edit an essay for second draft

I don’t know how to handle this English question and need guidance.

I uploaded an essay and I need to edit it for the second draft and add:

1- Interduce the new liberal femininity in the introduction paragraph

2- Add in the conclusion that is there no examples of new liberal femininity character in the movie that is in the essay and write that is the movie is more realistic than the movie in Sherman essay

3- add one paragraph to compare between the character Gracey in in the film Miss Congeniality and Madeline in big little lies

I uploaded sherman essay also if want to take a look at it