2008 Sichuan earthquake (Revision of Order 304184589).
Continuation/Revision of the Order 304184589. 1. Essay should have heading which is the description cause impact etc of essay content. 2. Bibliography should List only those sources you used in the essay (not everything you read). There are figures What is the impact of the collapse of a building? How much money is it going to cost? Is that the penultimate paragraph? It only says what further work has been suggested Your own thoughts about what needs to be completed to protect people and property from a similar event in the future. The page number is wrong 6. And figures should be written in bibliography 7. Figures need single space